Hey guys! I need some comments about my synopsis and see where I need to improve on because for starters, I honestly don't know if it's good or bad.
Title: Champion of the World
Synopsis
Heaven and Hell are at inevitable eternal war, bringing the mortal realm into their conflict. They are very vulnerable, and one of the gods sacrificed itself to give powers to the mortals. Those who inherited that power are called Champions.
One day, the demons attacked a kingdom where a boy named Liam Castor lived. While defending his home despite not becoming the knight that he dreamed of, he fell upon an underground cave where a core with power resides, turning him into a Champion and defeating the demons with one goal in his mind ever since he dreamed of becoming a knight. Protecting his home.
A group of knights from one of the most important kingdoms recruits him to their place where some of the Champions settled, so he can train and keep moving towards his goal. A journey for him to know what war and being one of the greatest heroes is like as he faces formidable foes and twisting situations that shape his goal, his purpose, and his life. In result of shaping his life, he changes the world with more than one ways.