I am just a novice writer with no experience whatsoever. I have no experience reading other Novels as well so the story I built up for months might be similar to any of the works you have already read. English is not my first language thus please do not expect me to have perfect grammar. There might even be many repetitions but I try to remove them while I proofread. I might be a novice but your feedback is gonna help me improve a lot.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/the-lord-of-the-ruins-the-world's-nightmare_23871875806167405
We can do a review swap as well but I won't be able to read your story completely however I can read the first few chapters. Upto 10 chapters, i guess.