I have put in great efforts to write these stories..🙂🙂 I would appreciate sincere feedback and comments for my novels.
I would applaud your genuine thoughts about my writing, So, that I can both explore my horizon and improve my skills.
-Keep it simple: I value quality over length.
-Be Honest: What did you think the best aspects were? Did you have an emotional response to any sections? Was
there anything that wasn’t written clearly?
-Don't be afraid to leave criticism.
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Link for my novels:
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https://www.webnovel.com/book/lady-boss-finds-love..._23232260406677405

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    Little_North_Star Done!! I really enjoyed reading your story...It has a totally unique concept.. I hope you can pay a little attention to grammar. But overall your story has great potential..I added it to library. .Keep up the good work.. 😃

        O_Vicente Hi!! I dropped by some comments as I read the first chapter.. The story development is interesting👍🏻👍🏻.. I sympathize with Oliver...😥

            Ishaisa
            I've done one of your books.
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            What did you think the best aspects were?
            It's a slice of life genre that talks about their school activity. it does pique my curiosity, assuming gu is the one shiyi will add in her fav list, how will it happen.

            Did you have an emotional response to any sections?
            The first chapter I thought she was crushing on the teacher.
            shiyi felt almost perfect until the next chapter surprise you.

            Was there anything that wasn’t written clearly?

            • is the one in <> consider author's note? maybe put it down below or incorporate it in your story like the name of the school.
            • regulars and defaulters. regulars made it seem like regular patrons of restaurant etc and defaulters, it felt off for me.

              Well, i'm not that of a new fresh member i did started a story long ago, but dropped because of lost of interest, but recently started a new fanfiction. Please take also into consideration that, i'm from Switzerland and talk french, English is not my native language, expect to have several errors💔 whether they are grammatical or structural😅. I'm waiting for a sincere feedback so that i can grow my horizon and try new things. Thank you for having taking the time to read it ^^ here is my work, its still going:

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                PerkyPompous_Pixie I reviewed your book and added some chapter comments as I read the story. Though, it is my first time reading a story which also contains manhunt and wars, but I really liked it. I really look forward to the pairing of Audrey and Fredrick..🙂🙂

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