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@Moonwriting i have read 2 chaps (3&4). will read more later on
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PerkyPompous_Pixie
Sure dear anytime....
4 months later
Megan_Immanuella Sure, feel free to start with mine and I'll reciprocate.
PerkyPompous_Pixie send me your
a month later
PerkyPompous_Pixie I'd like to do another swap . Here's tgthe linkhttps://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/25357471606989505?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4319974613.
Send me yours.
Megan_Immanuella I'd like to do one with you.
Here's the link to mine: https://m.webnovel.com/book/god-ash_24571391405017605
I hope to get a reply soon...
Demons_and_I I've replied on your book do mine. 
Demons_and_I I also need collections and powerstones. I'll do the same
Megan_Immanuella do mine too ,review and comments and I will do the same for you.
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/25438486105918705?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4321437087
As for the power stone,I only get 1 each day which I use for my own book
Megan_Immanuella I also need comprehensive chapter comments and criticizm. I'll go do a review on yours now ...
Megan_Immanuella Also, I'd like a real review that highlights the good points of my novel, while putting emphasis on the parts you feel I should improve on.
Demons_and_I ok I'm doing it now
Megan_Immanuella THANKS!!! 
Demons_and_I I've commented on thrthe prologue but still haven't seen yours.
Demons_and_I I've seen it now. Im gonna finish yours
Megan_Immanuella Thanks. I dropped a few chapter comments from chapters 1 to 5, so can I ask of you to do the same?
Demons_and_I Could you give me a review on this book still commenting on yours
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/25357471606989505?utm_
source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4319974613
Megan_Immanuella I haVE Given yours a review already....