Isha_24 so I read a little bit of your novel. It's not bad. You have used a completely different writing style which makes it confusing. You can add some punctuation for the dialogues even you are writing in this style or you can read some novels here to understand that. One thing which I have noticed is that you use brackets in between your chapters. You can write the same thing without brackets too. They are unnecessary. Try using grammerly for the grammer portion. Hope this was helpful.

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