aleksandra_pano10 changed the title to Honest review, opinions, comment and chapter comment for WSA 2022 ( ASAP).

    Hi all!πŸ‘‹ I started writing a new story. The main part of the plot revolves around a girl, who, as it turns out after, is not quite a girl (read more for yourself).😁 Genres: fantasy; tags: isekai, cultivators, gender intrigue.😲 Well, are you interested? Then why are you still here, run to read!πŸ˜‰πŸ€πŸ–€
    https://m.webnovel.com/book/primal-loli-seven-seals_24156820905360205

      Luv_Freek I really liked your story it had some kind of drama in it and I like how it wasn't fully focused on romance cuz sometimes so much romance runs the great plot story can have ( my opinion)

        Luv_Freek Well I think romance will spice up your book but since ML is a misterous character I would suggest you to focus more in his dark secrets.
        Tha would make story misterous and more charismatic .
        This is only my opinion based on my personal preferences, maybe other people would love to see more romance in your novel but this is what I think πŸ˜…
        For example in my novel I have romance genre but I'm more focused on the mistery and thrriller part of it.
        Maybe I won't attract much audience idk but this is what I like to do cuz it makes my story more original

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