Luv_Freek I really liked your story it had some kind of drama in it and I like how it wasn't fully focused on romance cuz sometimes so much romance runs the great plot story can have ( my opinion)

      Luv_Freek Well I think romance will spice up your book but since ML is a misterous character I would suggest you to focus more in his dark secrets.
      Tha would make story misterous and more charismatic .
      This is only my opinion based on my personal preferences, maybe other people would love to see more romance in your novel but this is what I think 😅
      For example in my novel I have romance genre but I'm more focused on the mistery and thrriller part of it.
      Maybe I won't attract much audience idk but this is what I like to do cuz it makes my story more original

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        Have you heard of Beauty and the Beast?

        In her previous life, Oliver got married to Damian, the Beta of the pack. Even though she tied the knot with him, her heart was only for the Alpha Alex, the one who enticed her to spy on her own husband.

        Yet, Oliver's heart began to lean on Damian after fifteen years of marriage.

        Doom fell on her as it was too late!

        She was betrayed! Her death followed her husband's on the very same day!

        Her enormous sin led Oliver to hell but, she was given a second chance by the Mother Goddess who had endless mercy.

        After serving the King of Hell for ten centuries, Oliver returned with her enhanced abilities to the beginning, to the day of her wedding to Damian!

        Oliver swore to survive and live her life peacefully this time. She also vowed to treat Damian with love and care. But, a new truth regarding Damian came to light and struck Oliver with a realization; she knew nothing about him at all!

        "If he's Arcadia, the Wolf God, why couldn't he save me in my past life? Even if he's Ulrika, the Wolf Ruler as others have claimed, there's also no way he could be defeated by his brother either!"

        Who Damian truly was under his impeccable mask? If he was just her Damian from her fond memories, why was he acting completely different in this life?

        No matter what, Oliver pledged her whole heart to keep her 'Beauty' safe as she was his Beast!

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          Name- transmigration , Birth of the cutest mafia lord..
          Genre- fantasy, romance, mystery,magical, Teen
          About the book - Liam is a very extroverted character ..In her previous world she was a business magnet..a very powerful person .. But she didn't give a DAMN!! to all this in fact she felt all this very boring.. One day she had a encounter and entered a parallel world ... in this world there were supernatural ability users.. here human and non-human species co-exist... and the most important thing is her host body is a future mafia family head...
          Rehan is the future supreme angel ... He was given a task before his crowning ceremony.. what if his task was related to her..
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            The Extra's Dominance

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            Synopsis:

            Cole is an novel author.

            He enjoys writing novels and even reading other's works as well.

            But that's just it.

            Reading and writing novels.

            Those are the only thing Cole enjoyed in his whole life.

            And as the time goes by, even doing those are becoming boring for Cole.

            But then one day, Cole recieved a mail!

            The mail said that his work has been chosen!

            In a contest? No.

            Cole's novel was chosen by a Higher Being to make it a reality!

            "What kind of bullshit is this?"

            "Whoever sent this must have few loose screws in their head."

            Cole didn't take the mail seriously.

            "Huh?"

            That is until he was sent in to his own novel!

            Cole became Raven Obadiah of his novel!

            Who is Raven Obadiah?

            No Idea! He's just an Extra in the novel!

            ...Or is he really just an Extra?

            [Drei05]: It's my first time writing a novel, hoping for your support!

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