Before I say anything I want to apologize if I come of as offensive or rude. I am only offering some friendly criticism and advice. From what I read your story definitely has potential, but you need to get better at writing in English. As is it would need to be completely rewritten to be understandable, without having to try and figure out what every paragraph means..

    Letherax

    When I reach 14k words I will rewrite the entire novel. And i want to get better cause of that i didn't offended if you want you can help me

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