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Hi, my name is Jeffrey Robert Palin Jr., Check out my novel. Please tell me what you think. Be brutally honest, I need the critiques.

The story is a Fiction titled Cyber-multiverse Milieu .

It is Fantasy and Science Fiction.

The story begins after the chapter called Author’s Notes. The Author’s Notes chapter is not necessary to read but I think it might help.

I’ll read as much of your story as you read of mine, mine is 12 Chapters.

https://m.webnovel.com/book/cyber-multiverse-milieu_24313933005512405

Leyanne_
Here is mine.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/the-way-of-the-villain_24309242606764905

Please you all should read

https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/23991665705053005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4322042577

Gere is my book
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/24288171806617705?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4317009531

Here's mine https://www.webnovel.com/book/level-57_24135508505198105
Now give me yours .

https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-new-system_24336053805682005

Lovell_Curts wanna do a review or comment swap?

https://www.webnovel.com/book/i-created-magic!_24355087405828805

Here is mine:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/abyssal-firmament_23269751206843805

Here is mine
Joseph, The Icon of Destiny
https://www.webnovel.com/book/24288171806617705/65381539101340626?utm_campaign=4317009531

Account_nolonger Done yours already. Honestly, I found it interesting so I left a few chapter comments and a power stone, I didn't have enough. Nice book, though. Good luck on the WSA

Leyanne_

Check out my book and I would do the same

https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/24236526305961505?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4321717394

Check out my book and I would do the same

https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/24236526305961505?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4321717394

Blak_cherry

Check out my book and I would do the same

https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/24236526305961505?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4321717394

New chapter released. Check it out

https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/24294035105354305?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4322421854

Blak_cherry I am starting yours.

Leyanne_ https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/24216163406107205?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4314815522

Blak_cherry I loved your book, keep up the good work

Leyanne_ Here is mine, I'll definitely read yours. Title; Enslaved by the vampire prince https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/24301214205410905?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4321565901