Kirito_K5 I thought i'd drop a nice review for you on the book itself and keep the feedback here 🙂 I like your world building and the was you're setting things up. Also how you started really strong with the action. Personally as a reader I like more visual storytelling and character development so keep an eye out for little things like quirks and lines of dialogue you could use to make your characters stand out from each other more. <3 Hope that helps!

      I'd be willing to review anyone's work if you want an honest review. I am a bit of a critic but I will help you point out the hiccups in your writing. I'm also fluent in English being from the USA, so if you need help with grammar I'd be more than happy to assist you. Just, no smut novels or anything like that. I like action and in-depth writing.

        Hello, anyone wanna do review, comment and collection swap?

        Also OP, I'm doing yours rn.

        Here's mine.

        Title : The Macabre Rendezvous
        Link : https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-macabre-rendezvous_23323346305872005###
        Tag: Historical Fiction, Romance, Evil Protagonist, Gore, Crime
        Trigger Warning : This novel contains graphic gore scenes. Reader discursion is advised.
        Brief summary:

        Murder is not a mistake. It is a choice.

        Mercy, now known as Myra thought she had left her past behind and lived a normal life. Her definition of normal life, that is.
        However, the universe was not on her side. Peelers came knocking on her master's door bringing doom with them.
        But her prediction did not come true, life took her in an unexpected direction.

          Nyxxie_Auclair Thank you very much! I'm not getting notifications for this thread but I will get to giving you a review as well right now.

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