pink_lollie24 Hi, I reviewed your book. Very hard to read and understand. This type of novels are to be read for entertainment, for a few minutes,etc. No one wants a difficult-to-read story. We are not at school here.
An Honest Review or Comment in Exchange for a Power stone
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MatildasBT thanks for a moment thereI thought it was way too simple 
haha, sure I'll keep what you say in mind
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pink_lollie24 too many dialogues in a row, and the paragraphs are too big, mixing normal text with dialogues.
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MatildasBT Thank you I appreciate this
pink_lollie24 hey l am interested.. and for that l will not only do review but will also do chapter and paragraph vomments like first day l will read first five chapters and then will do chapter comments.. the second day l will review ur book.. third and fouth day l will do another 5 5 chapter comments as u have 17 chapters... So in total u gonna have 4 days work from me and can have total story's honest review...
And for that u have to give me 2 ps everyday for the 4 days...
How is the deal?? If interested plzz reply on this text...
https://m.webnovel.com/book/my-boyfriend-is-a-hidden-mafia-boss_24848789905990905
Here is my book.. fif u r interested
I already reviewed yours sometime ago
_Rockbison_ you have a deal
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_Rockbison_ I can only give one a day, how about for an entire week and a day? Let me know when you start. Just sent you a power stone today
GeniusIthink sorry I can’t power stone your book.
pink_lollie24 okayy then u have to give me for 8 days... Thank u so much.. l am also going to do it now
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19 days later
pink_lollie24 Author's Review Here: This is not perfect, still unedited and shitty at all but, I hope you enjoy reading this. Thanks!
Would you like to read something 'different'? WAY different from those mediocre ones you had encounter in any reading website? Do not fret, as I, Ms. Author, introduce you to my Series: 'Tales of the Demon Hero'
FOR BOOK II.
A Kingdom in confusion relies on the assistance of known the 'Demon Witch', Lady Rai, as their 'Imperial Hero and Ruler'. This is the story how the 'Demon Ruler' maliciously 'saved' their dying Kingdom and selves...in a strange way, again.
You might found this a little - NO! A lot strange for you, Reader, but I highly appreciate any reviews/reactions/comments for these stories. Will try to read yours if you have one writing at the moment.
(P.S: Read the TODH first before reading this.)
Thank you.