@Kana_Haisha thank you so much for the time and energy you put in this! I’ll take it with me as I continue writing (and rewriting) the story.

Also your take on them both being asshole’s: you’re absolutely right. I tried to walk the edge with it, and I’m afraid I overdid it. You’ve given me a lot to think about.

Also I’m screaming at the compliments. Thank you and have a great day 😄

    RaedaX_1 I forgot to mention that I love fanfiction. And Avatar the last air bender is my favourite anime.

        RaedaX_1 I have added it to my library. Soon, I will give your story a review. And when you are done with mine, let me know.

            @EveZenier I dropped a nice, comprehensive review on your fiction. I hope it helps.

              Sigheti No problem. I am more than happy that you shared your honest feelings. If you did not find my story to your liking, then I can just work hard to make it better so that you could like it. Besides, It was my first story and I didn't give it much thought. Just wrote it for fun. After my exams are over, I will surely work hard on improving my mistakes and making it more interesting than ever before.

                Sigheti I will surely write a review after I am done reading all of the chapters. Hope you understand as it might take some time.

                    EveZenier I don’t expect you to read all of it! It’s up to 26000 words at the moment. If you read the first 5 chapters and give me your honest thoughts on them, I would be quite content already.

                      Sakura_Charmash I have checked it out. So, let me be honest. I have my exams by the end of this month. So, I cannot read your book completely. Rather, I can try to read the first few chapters and write a review based on them. Hope you understand my point of view.

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