Choka
Have already read your book so many times and to be honest, I seem not to find any fault or bad grammar or anything like that in your book...
To be truthful, The more I read your book, theore I get obsessed with it 😅😅...
I simply don't know why that's happening 🥺🥺...
But that's the truth...
I really think you did a great work writing the book perfectly cause seriously I don't think you made any error or anything like that in your book even though you are not perfect
And really, that just amaze me the more I read🙂🙂...
P s I really do love your book 🙂🙂

      Rainandstorm I really appreciate that, that made my day haha. What do you think about the system settings and such, especially the characters introduction till now.

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          Choka
          I really do like the way you introduce the characters, Their description somehow gives me a realistic Image in my head, like am actually seeing them in person 😅😅😅...
          I also love the setting and the background of the novel and to be honest, I think am starting to fall in love with you for writing everything so perfectly 😅😅 cause to say the truth I can't write such a masterpiece like you do🙂🙂🙂

              Rainandstorm it's far from a masterpiece lol. But thanks for your kind words anyway, don't know if they are true or nah but I still appreciate them, I'll try to improve even more regardless.

                9 days later

                Choka would do that. Please read mine also an add a review. Rate it too.

                    Moonwriting I usually don't have time so I can only add a review, add to my library, vote if possible and rate the book. Is that fine? If the book catches my fancy, I would continue reading it...I can't force myself to read what I don't like. Hope you understand.

                    Done please check mine out.

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