Philia_Hilz Hi! I started a new book too, it's called 'Scripted Fate'. It's like an Isekai-ish fantasy with a lot of inspiration from Japanese mythology, and it set in a post apocalyptic world as well. I rewrote it because I wasn't happy with it so I'm really interested in what you might think of the new first chapter! Here's the link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/23193438706529005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4321021085

      Philia_Hilz But your review didn't have any useful information, you only told me that grammar is good. You didn't say anything about writing quality, world background, Mc characters, system and the novel in general. Your review didn't help me with anything bro.

          I just added it to my library, will read through later and give a review

            Para23 I'm done. I really liked your world building, like it's very nice but the book isn't my kind of book. Don't be discouraged, keep it up 👍

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