Hi, I’m a new author and I’m looking for some constructive feedback on my novel. It’s called “Mystery in the Whispering Grove” and it’s a fantasy novel with a hint of adventure, action, mystery, and romance.
It’s about Aria and Theo, two chosen Keepers who have to master the elemental powers of Earth, Air, Water, and Fire to protect the ancient Whispering Grove from a dark threat. Along the way, they discover the secrets of light and shadow, truth and illusion, and their own destiny.
If you enjoy stories with magic, mystery, and some adventure, you’ll love this novel. And if you don’t, I’d still value your opinion on how I can improve my writing style and craft a better story.
You can read my novel here:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/mystery-of-the-whispering-grove_27706412300716305

Please read it and let me know what you think.
Thank you for your time and support. I look forward to hearing from you soon. 😊

    Hi everyone, please try my book Seven Sons. It is an adventure-type story where the Main Character Ark is a hero created by the Goddess of Creation Almira to protect humans against magical beasts and demons. He will soon have children, seven sons that will be the center of the story. I hope you can help me. Here is the link https://www.webnovel.com/book/seven-sons_27845431400100705. Thank you in advance.

      Hi all! My coauthor and I just starting posting our duel POV fantasy romance, Mortal Decoy. It's full of demons, magic, demon hunters, revenge, and rivalries. We'll be posting at least 2 chapters every week. It's currently at 5 chapters, which is about 23k words. We'd love for you to check it our and hear your thoughts!
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        Hi... If you're interested in reading a Female Lead - Fun Fantasy Adventure Story, please give the book of my friend a read.

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        Thanks a lot!!!

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          Hello everyone! So, I've got the first volume of my new book up on WN. Please, I'm hoping to get some good reviews on this volume. Any writers who read my book, drop me a line, and I'll be sure to read yours.
          Read here!

            Hi, I’m a new author and I’m looking for some constructive feedback on my novel. It’s called “Mystery in the Whispering Grove” and it’s a fantasy novel with a hint of adventure, action, mystery, and romance.
            It’s about Aria and Theo, two chosen Keepers who have to master the elemental powers of Earth, Air, Water, and Fire to protect the ancient Whispering Grove from a dark threat. Along the way, they discover the secrets of light and shadow, truth and illusion, and their own destiny.
            If you enjoy stories with magic, mystery, and some adventure, you’ll love this novel. And if you don’t, I’d still value your opinion on how I can improve my writing style and craft a better story.
            You can read my novel here:
            https://www.webnovel.com/book/mystery-of-the-whispering-grove_27706412300716305

            Please read it and let me know what you think.
            Thank you for your time and support. I look forward to hearing from you soon. 😊

              Hi! I wish you a peaceful and cozy November. If you are interested in reading a fantasy romance where the male lead comes from ancient times and gradually falls in love with a female CEO you can check out my novel.

              Here's the link: [https://www.webnovel.com/book/i-wish-i-could-love-you_27720547208257405]

              I hope you will have a good time reading the story. Comments and reviews are highly appreciated, so is the act of reading the novel itself. Thank you.

                This is my first novel.

                synopsis:

                "The first memory that overwhelmed my mind as I woke up in this unfamiliar form was the horrifying image of my own father decapitating me,” reminisced Garrick Stormwind, the Archduke of Astrea. Brutally murdered by his own family, he inexplicably finds himself imprisoned in an unknown body, shackled within the confines of a dungeon, consumed by an intense desire for revenge. Join him on his unwavering journey for justice and understanding as we delve into the captivating story of The Revived Archduke's Revenge.

                Thank you for your time and support.

                https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-revived-archduke's-revenge_27763328308994605

                  Well I'm dropping daily releases on my book...failed State...it's not really something most of you are used to or see on a daily basis...so I'd really like it of you all check it out

                    Hi, I’m a new author and I’m looking for some constructive feedback on my novel. It’s called “Mystery in the Whispering Grove” and it’s a fantasy novel with a hint of adventure, action, mystery, and romance.
                    It’s about Aria and Theo, two chosen Keepers who have to master the elemental powers of Earth, Air, Water, and Fire to protect the ancient Whispering Grove from a dark threat. Along the way, they discover the secrets of light and shadow, truth and illusion, and their own destiny.
                    If you enjoy stories with magic, mystery, and some adventure, you’ll love this novel. And if you don’t, I’d still value your opinion on how I can improve my writing style and craft a better story.
                    You can read my novel here:
                    https://www.webnovel.com/book/mystery-of-the-whispering-grove_27706412300716305

                    Please read it and let me know what you think.
                    Thank you for your time and support. I look forward to hearing from you soon. 😊

                      Hi, I'm InkSage
                      So, there's a fantasy themed novel I'm presently writing, it's titled Cultivating Eternal Divinity
                      It's actually good, if you ask me, but I'll leave that for you to decide.

                      Synopsis
                      Cultivation is a thorny path, where uncertainty and countless trials reign, with most reaching their end at the machinations of Heaven's will. In this grand journey, many falter before grasping the true essence of power, falling victim to the inevitability of fate's tricks.

                      In a seemingly insignificant corner of a minor world, Kong Xiang embarks on his unique cultivation journey. Amidst the myriad Dao pathways, he grapples with the trials and tribulations, snatching his fate from the heavens and leaving his destiny in his hands alone. Will he be able to forge his own path in the unpredictable world of cultivation, amidst ever-present uncertainties and challenges?

                      "Let the heavens tremble and the world stand in opposition! I'll forge my path with unwavering determination and the might of my spirit.

                      Here's the link;👇👇👇

                      https://m.webnovel.com/book/cultivating-eternal-divinity_22081567106445305

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