MishaK I am sorry. I truly don't like the plot. I do not want to swap.

      Charlotte8 please take that comment down. That’s untrue synopsis of the book! And from next time don’t give baseless claims to other authors also!

          MishaK I believe I wrote a review on that when there was almost nothing published (five chapters). It did look like the story could possibly go in that direction at that time.

          Now I have no idea in what direction the story DID go, because I dropped it (perhaps incorrectly) for the reasons Charlotte8 mentioned.

          If I recall correctly it's basically chapters one and two which are to blame if a reader makes such an assumption (assuming you haven't done a total rewrite of the beginning since my review).

              StenDuring Well, it’s better to check the direction and then conclude about it. And now there are more than 30 chapters in it so I would assume that the reviewer has read a good portion before even commenting so irresponsibly.

                  littlehera Ok, sorry for the late response, haven't checked the forum in a couple weeks, and it'll probably be a few days, but I'll try to do it soon.

                      MishaK I edited the comment. However, I read through to chapter 15 and found nothing to change my mind about the direction the story was heading.

                          MishaK Yep. There's a difference. There were only five chapters when I read, so I had to run with what was there at the time.

                          Still, IF the beginning of the story might mislead the reader, then it's probably profitable to take a closer look at that beginning.

                          Same with my story. I'm seeing a pattern in responses about my beginning. That means I'll have to rewite it. Now I 'just' have to find a good way to do that :D

                              With the help of you fantastic reviewers I might have found a soluion to the confusion. I simply rewrote chapter two, linking it to the first chapter and feeding into chapter three.

                              Yanked the intro as well. Let's see if readers get less confused now. If so it's all because of the input you gave me.

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