DJRogue Review done. Sweet read. I've noted down the weaknesses I saw, as well as the strengths.

    DJRogue Agreed. I'm not done with your story yet, but so far I am loving the build of The Phoenix Aspect.

    Too bad this swap is not for me.

      jikanyotomare

      I'll be frank and pose the question if you want me to do the review. I'm ten chapters in and as far as I can tell you won't be very happy with my review.
      I'll continue reading, but I won't post a review unless you explicitly give me an OK to do so.

        And that leaves me with an empty queue. Any swaptakers?

          NEidarous
          Your comment came just in time! In a few minutes, I'll have something up that hopefully helps you (and everyone else)! ;)

            StenDuring thank you for your review... its quite harsh...huhu...
            however, what you write is true, since this is my first novel in english and i am bad at using grammar there will be many mistakes. thank you for point it out... i will try my best to fix it...

              jikanyotomare I really didn't enjoy hacking away as I did, but I've given myself a promise to keep my integrity as a reviewer. If any consolation at all, I hope it'll help you create a better story.

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