chonnie Hi Chonnie, read both your stories. I didn't leave a review as you only have 3 chapters up. But I do have some advice for you.

(1) Drop one of your books, trying to write two books at once it going to come back and bite you, I did that - and what happens is one of your books takes off, readers are demanding releases - and you want to keep them happy, so in the end you start to concentrate on that book, and you end up pissing off the readers on your other book.

(2) Constant, Stable Releases: This is so important to build a "fan" base for your novel, if you had only concentrated on 1 novel, it would already have 6 chapters. If you want to be popular you really need to try to release at least 1 chapter per day.

So far I enjoyed both your stories, your writing is good, some spelling and grammar mistakes (tbh your mistakes are a lot less than mine - so kudos to you on that!) - if you not using Grammarly (free version) - do download it - it really helps to pick up some of the more common mistakes - hee hee I tend to have a major issue with comma's according to the weekly report I get.

By the way, I love your cover art for both your books.

Once you have at least 10 chapters I will definitely give you an "official" review on your books. But in my humble opinion I do think you have talent, so please don't give up, I really think you will go far.

FYI: https://owlcation.com/ is a site I turn to often as a resource.

      DJRogue What a great piece of advice you have there. New authors should definitely heed this...haha if only this was posted three weeks prior :P

          Hello, I’m new to forums and advertising, so please bear with me. Or help me out if you see I’m doing things wrong.

          Anyways, I always liked warping stories from their originals as a sort of ‘what if’. Kind of like how a story would have turned out if things took different turns. That being said, I’d like to hear feedback, and maybe help on improving my writing or storytelling skills.

          Here’s a fanfiction I write for fun.

          Title: Out of Foxes to Give

          Summary: When you’re born as Naruto Uzumaki, mass confusion normally follows. Everything is pretty bad as it can get, but look on the bright side, things can’t get any worse, right?

          Wrong.

          Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/12801778505391505

          Um, I’ll review other people’s books, too. I just need to figure out how this works...

            Acutelittletrap Sure Forsaken would be happy too, but like the rest of you I am also a fledgling author, so I can only give you my honest opinion. Will reply once I am done reading through your novel.

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