JacksonWalker SURE.i wanna know what people really feel about my book and offer me good suggestions. most talked about the grammar stuff and spelling and i'm working on thatalso the spacing.

      niharikabhol I'll take a look, unfortunately I wouldn't have time for a swap. Writing and work keeping me busy. I still can read some chapters.

      Man, you had to be in the same writing comp as NatsumeRikka XD That's some stiff competition. :smile_cat:

      I'll read as much as I can, no problems :grin:

          niharikabhol I'll take a look, unfortunately I wouldn't have time for a swap. Writing and work keeping me busy. I still can read some chapters.

          Man, you had to be in the same writing comp as NatsumeRikka XD That's some stiff competition. :smile_cat:

          I'll read as much as I can, no problems :grin:

              Veronica8 What to do ? I have already rolled the dice 😪😪😪
              Help me with some votes then or a shout-out. But please do try to read. You were one of my first reviewers for my first novel and I would like to have you review here too !!!

                  niharikabhol I'm reading! I'm reading! XD. 😁

                  Ok, If you're able to do a swap for The Fourth Zaldizko then. Only Chryiss review is there. Needs a friend. 😁. I think there should be enough chapters there for a review.

                  I'll post a review on yours when you have more chapters up. Or you ok for me to review on your first chapters? Let me know.

                      stella2138 Sorry it took a while. I put a review for your story. Hopefully it is a reasonable critic and if you have any questions, feel free to ask.

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