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TheOmnipotentOne
Bro you didn't reviewed mine. Mine is called The looming death. You reviewed on other person work.

Review ....paragraph and chapter comments ......collection or author page like.... let's swap whatever you want to notify me by doing it first
Link
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DamnedChicken
Sorry bout the previous review.
Reviewed this one too.
Thanks BTW.
The story is amazing too though I got city of sin kind of starting vibes.

Moonwriting
I reviewed your book. I don't wanted to list down all the negative points in review. So, I'll do it here instead. The writing was good, some silly typos here and there. The way you developed the main characters was amazing too. I'll be honest the plot was pretty good.

-I am waiting for your review too.

DamnedChicken I’m down to do a 2 Chapter review swap. You only have to read my first two chapters. At least one comment on the two Chapters and then a review about what you read. I’ll do the same. Let me know.

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UpSide
I reviewed your novel. If you want a detailed analysis I can leave one here. Ask me

-I hope you review my novel, soon.

DamnedChicken I’d love to hear anything you don’t mind sharing, even if it’s brute honesty. I need all the improvement I can get. Awesome review. I really appreciate what you wrote. I’ll be reading your story tonight and tomorrow. I’ll leave comments and a review about what I’ve read. Thanks

DamnedChicken
Sure..you can and plz let me know the negative points as well....thank you fore your efforts

Moonwriting
Well, there were not many negative points for a casual reader. For a hardcore one, the overuse of the first person really ticked me off. You only do their inner monologues rather than world-building. Which is equally important. You don't have many typos. Just little structural mistakes here and there.

DamnedChicken collected, reviewed and commented. I could see room for improvement in your book and I wish you all the best.
Here is my link if you are inclined to return the favor,
[https://m.webnovel.com/book/snow-n'-starlight_24482881305635405](https://)
Please take my criticism in the constructive sense it was meant.

Roth_Raven reviewed, collected and commented. Please return the favor. Here is my link.
[https://m.webnovel.com/book/snow-n'-starlight_24482881305635405](https://)

Grace_Harley1 reviewed, collected and commented. Please return the favor when time permits.
My link: [https://m.webnovel.com/book/snow-n'-starlight_24482881305635405](https://)

UpSide I'm in, please give me your link. Thanks

Rainandstorm I just reviewed yours thanks

Sakura_Charmash I just reviewed yours.
Thanks

Sakura_Charmash
Can you please give me some tips to make my novel more descriptive, the characters more alive and the flow better.

Sakura_Charmash https://m.webnovel.com/book/cyber-multiverse-milieu_24313933005512405

DamnedChicken why don't we talk over in discord. If you are inclined add me in discord.
Sakura_Charmash#5464
I'll be glad to help.