DamnedChicken why don't we talk over in discord. If you are inclined add me in discord.
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I'll be glad to help. ☺️

    UpSide reviewed, collected and commented, please take my review in the constructive sense it was meant. Your idea is very interesting, top quality. But your writing needs great improvement. I suggest you read up a few well known novels to get an idea where the style of writing in them differs from yours and improve your work accordingly.

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