King_Undead done, and to the collection, and paragraph comments and chapters comments, with the review, please do the same πŸ˜€

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    Hi, I'm open to review swaps, but I need some honest feedback, preferably in paragraph or chapter comments. I know that my novel is lacking, but I can't pinpoint what the problem is (I'm sure it has a lot of issues, but bear with me). If anyone has the time, please help me. Thank you.πŸ™πŸ™πŸ˜

    You can read my novel here:
    https://www.webnovel.com/book/mystery-of-the-whispering-grove_27706412300716305

    Please read it and let me know what you think.
    Thank you for your time and support. I look forward to hearing from you soon. 😊

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