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I’m a young writer, and I just started putting out one of my works on Webnovel. I have some form of a scheduling plan, but nothing is set in stone. I was wondering if I could get someone to give me a review of my story to gauge how well I am doing this far, and then I was wondering if I could get some advice on how to proceed with my story, such as when to upload, the title, the cover, etc. My novel is called The Spirit of Freedom, and it will probably take you about 20 minutes to read through the five chapters I have already posted. If anyone could help me out I would greatly appreciate it.

acebellrain I read your story, and to me it was kind of like a dream. It was hard to really understand what was happening, not that it wasn’t descriptive enough just that I didn’t quite understand the context of the monsters and magic stuff fully. I am guessing that you will continue the story since it is only three chapters long, so it will probably be explained later down the line. If you could read my story and get back to me as soon as possible then that would be great, the one thing I want to say before you start reading is that unlike your story my story isn’t very descriptive and it is meant to be written as if someone is telling a story at a campfire or just telling the story to an audience as a whole, like a myth.

acebellrain btw here’s the link https://m.webnovel.com/book/the-spirit-of-freedom_25432046705901605

HenryKuhn Review mine also and I will do yours shortly. Here's the link.
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/25438486105918705?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4321437087

HenryKuhn alrighty so I just finished reading through your five chapters. it's definitely much different than anything i've read before, with the style and approach you're going for. for me my only problem was that it was kind of hard to get immersed into the characters or scenarios this way; but that might just be a me thing, your actual writing is very solid. i would suggest maybe only uploading once a week to make it easier on yourself but if you think it's fine then what you have going right now is perfect !

your cover and title is also great, maybe the only thing i'd change is the synopsis. it feels a little dull to me. thanks again for checking out my story and i hope this helps a lil bit ^^

acebellrain I am checking yours now, hope you will also read and review mine, also add it to your library.
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/25438486105918705?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4321437087