CGiverny I saw your review and comments,, and you are the first person so far to comment this properly , most just say some stupid things.
I just want to ask why did I only received 4.5 stars, where is the half star.

    King_Undead

    I did it because of grammar and spelling. If you use a grammar checker like Grammarly or Pro Writing Aid (even google docs works) then you wouldn't have them. I get that English may not be your first language but there are still free resources you can use to check your grammar (English also isn't my first language so I understand that some grammar can be confusing)

      CGiverny ok, and thanks for your comments throughout all the chapters.
      I would review yours shortly , I added it to my collection.

      CGiverny

      I done reading and giving it my review dear..stay in touch for more...sry for taking it more time because of some personal reasons...

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