I just read a few chapters and thought I should show you the quality of the novel.
Example:
Chapter 258:
+ At the back of the stands, too young man in sunglasses were whispering to each other. -> two ... men
+ "However, Han Sen's strength was assassination. ---> it still is his strength. It should be "is assassination."
+ Although they did not believe that Blackhawk was the match of the Alliance Central Military Academy, ---> was a match for
Chapter 259:
+ the five players from Blackhawk lined up in a single file and ran into the --> in a single line
+ "What kind tactics is this?" ---> If it's "kind tactics" then it should be "are these". Or should it be "What kind of tactic is this?"
+ Blackhawk have made such a bad move. ---> has
+ If she used this tactics on another team, then ---> this tactic
Chapter 260:
+ and the voice of AI sounded in the field, shocking --> voice of an AI
Chapter 261:
+ Han Sen's arrow were bounced off immediately and --> Han Sen's arrow was
+ The audience were again amazed by --> The audience was
+ "Jing Jiwu is indeed the monster." ---> It was dozens of times translated as "a monster"
+ In the field mimicking a labyrinthine, Jing Jiwu was ---> either "mimicking a labyrinth" or "labyrinthine field"
+ Although they had not make a single shot, their --> had not made
+ However, after half an hour that you were still not able to make a shot --> from the context it should be: "half an hour, the two were still"
+ No matter Han Sen or Jing Jiwu could have fallen into the range of their opponents a million times, but they could always turn away from a crisis. --> No matter Han Sen or Jing Jiwu, either one could have...
+ he would have a chance to beat Jing Jiwu however, for tactics, he chose a 11.0." --> to beat Jing Jiwu; however .... an 11.0