Honestly,
For a new author to write a novel with this much detail and planned out conflict but also putting in morals and life values is amazing. I applaud this original work. Although it's not completely a new story that's never done before. It is not your typical light novel with a clique storyline.
I enjoyed it thoroughly so far and hope it continues to get better and better, leaving me more and more breathless as time goes.
I highly recommend this story and the protagonist Erza is not your typical stupid reliant MC.
Rate: 5/5 <3

    Tameki Thanks for endorsing my novel. I do hope that it gains more readers in the interim.

        Sorry don't agree with you after a certain chapters the Mc becomes too stupid. The portrait of the Mc doesn't add up and you just can't continue to read. Sorry!!! Logical thinking scientist to unlogical muscle head who goes out to adventure as a few month baby no thx.

          TravelingPoet I pride myself on seeing truth and logic in this world and know that if there are such things as other plains of existence, that logic might go out of the window, or at least what I see as logic, any scientist with half a brain would concur, so adapting to what the new logic would be is logical for such a mind. You'd probably be one of those that end up sitting there confused due to how "illogical" the world around you is, while Ezra and I are the kind that'd adapt to our environment and test to see what the new logic of this land is. Actually, Ezra seems more realistic than a character modeled after me would seem, cause he is actually a little more stuck in the logic of his old world than I would be.;,;.

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