Hello everyone, I am writing a fantasy novel and I am hoping for some insights. I would love to hear your opinions on what I have written so far. I would also review your stories if you have any. Also please be as brutally honest as you can.
Here is the book:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/25896487006544205
Also if you are interested in continuing my book, I will upload three chapters a week (Monday, wednesday and friday) starting next week.
Coffee_Stories Sure, let's swap, I'll read yours and you review mine (I'll do the same)
Mine
https://www.webnovel.com/book/traveler's-will_25553012106498105
Coffee_Stories Done! Please review my book --> https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-devil-venerable's-mate-%5Bbl%5D_24935111305339705
Hi I'll review your book if you do mine as well....The V Academy : A Knight's love
Coffee_Stories Hi there. I will be happy to review your work. Here are links to my books for you to look at as well, https://www.webnovel.com/book/noble-beast_24939745906620805
https://www.webnovel.com/book/thunderdom-trilogies_24939745906620705
Coffee_Stories Hi! I'd like to swap reviews with you. I will read the first 3 chapters of your story, comment on them if I have any suggestions or corrections, I will also give an in depth review stating what I think of your story. An honest one. I will also give you tips on how to improve and stuff. If you're interested, please reply.
Here's the link to my story: https://www.webnovel.com/book/graveyard-residents_25872215405208305
Coffee_Stories Hi done. Para, chapter comments and a review.
And honestly, I really like what you have written. It was great, the pace wasn't too slow or fast. Some minor mistakes but it didn't disrupt reading or anything.
Please help to do the same for my story.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/zuomeng-to-dream_24984202306740805/author's-note_67066732887467428
Riley_23 Sure I would love that
Coffee_Stories Mind leaving me a review? I left one on yours.
Link - https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-horatius-era_25735615906984505
