Bro, I only read male read stories and even in them I prefer sci-fi, fictional, fantasy, anime, etc genre
But your story doesn't contain any of the following things so I can't review your novel
prettygirl_93

      Starting out a new book, a fantasy story, I'd appreciate a review and comment. I'd give you book one in return.

      https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/25799075706197705?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4310924631

      The world was destroyed. The war happened out of nowhere, creatures no different from us invaded our world and peace was lost.

      The strong ones fell first, and the weaker ones could only take up their arms to fight. I was among the weak ones, caught in a battle among gods, an ant like died from the shockwaves. And so my story ended, or so I thought, I went back in time to my childhood.

      *

      It wasn't supposed to be this way, this wasn't how the novel goes, where did all these portals come from, they weren't in the novel. Oh my god, what am I going to do?

      A novel transmigrator breezes through life in a new world only she discovers not everything went according to the book she read. She makes an effort to fix the mistakes and return the world to order, but it's too late. She can only put her hopes on him.

      *

      SYSTEM NOTICE

      You're fucked.

      He could only stare at the cheeky system in shock, looking around at the chaos and destruction around, maybe it was right. Maybe he was fucked.

      SYSTEM: THERE IS A WAY TO FIX EVERYTHING.

      *

      Everything she knew and loved was gone, she never wanted the destruction of the world, but she couldn't help it. This was her curse, hers and her people.

      She gazed upon the weak one that watched their battle and raised her hands in one last prayer. To fix things.

      What happens when the a transmigrator meets the original protagonist, when a regressor meets the final boss?

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