Review Swap here!
Review swap. Pick either/both book 
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I am a sword Spirit 7 chapters so far
and
Cultivating Immortality 15 chapters so far
wilde0985 Hello denisewilde! I will like to invite you to
publish your works on our new website, www.ritoria.com. Hope to see you there. 
skylit3r I added the second one to my collections, check mine out
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/24909777606506005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4320831345
[Congratulations, Terranian survivor #99598, for activating the Universe Assistance System!]
Althea, along with the remaining 1% of the population of their home planet, stared at the holographic screen in front of them in confusion.
Their galaxy was apparently ending, and suddenly announcements from an alien system appeared in their heads, telling them they would be permanently transfered to another world.
The survivors were all very depressed. First they were forced to survive in a zombie apocalypse, and now they had to survive a new world altogether?
It just so happened that Althea was one of the few people who got the Lord Token, the ticket to controlling a territory---a supposed safe haven for her people.
Althea looked at her very large stomach and sighed at an unknown future.
Would she be able to build a good home for her children and fellowmen?
And... would she and her husband find each other again?
Tags: #Josei, #Apocalypse, #Infrastructure, #KingdomBuilding, #Romance, #Game Elements, #System #LitRPG
https://www.webnovel.com/book/altera-city-in-another-world_25926694405418805
mahe_ale_aba Hi, I hope you are doing well! I already reviewed your story, but what kind of review do you want, like a beta reader's feedback? Meaning giving you pointers on where you can get the best of the story, grammar, and syntax?
wilde0985 like the one where u can tell how did u like the story or what should i improve to become better
wilde0985 yeah sure i dont mind , and i am doing well how are u !!!!
mahe_ale_aba I'm really behind my schedule this week, but by the weekend, I can do it. I'm going to give you a link to a MS Document with the feedback I hate it doing it through the comments. Are you ok with that?
wilde0985 sure I don’t mind that at all
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mahe_ale_aba Great, thank you! Btw I'm doing well too, Thanks 
wilde0985 hii so sorry i sent you the wrong ink
mahe_ale_aba oh don't worry send me the one you want the review
