MeowMeowGourmet On it. Would u mind adding to collection as well.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/hanna's-warrior-queen-jwala_26298072906909005
Collection, review and comment swap
theword_witch Sure thing
MeowMeowGourmet I just left a review. A suggestion. Show more about what kind of person the MC is, so far it's all about his life and things happening to him. We know little to nothing about how he is as a person other than that he was sad to die a virgin.
lo_rezi I left a review on your book. I hope it doesn't discourage you author-sama. I'd be glad to accept constructive criticism as well and please, be brutally honest with it. Here's the link http://wbnv.in/a/dbhfza7
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theword_witch Hello author-sama. I've left a review on your book and I really liked it especially how you wrote a character like Jwala. Do you have any suggestions or advice in regard to that?
Mine is an R-18 so I will only do yours if you do mine~! Don't want to force anyone to read R18 
HeatherReader I'll do yours. Here's a link to mine author-sama. http://wbnv.in/a/dbhfza7
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MeowMeowGourmet Thank you for the review. I m glad you liked the story.
As for tips... I don't have much. But I read webnovel's article 'how to write a webnovel'. It helped alot. It's available on their site plus join discord. There are other writers who might be of help.
Read the genre you write in.
and once you're done writing the chapter, read out loud. That would help you find out any unnatural or weird sounding lines.
Always revise before publishing the chapters.
By the way, you are doing great. As you write more chapters, you'll only get better. 
MeowMeowGourmet thanks for being honest and to be sincer I was honest as well
But you have a perfect work there,not so perfect but it's good
Thanks again
HeatherReader I'm in here's minehttps://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26379052305929005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4321588205
Also do well to add to ur collection ill do same
lo_rezi Yep! Done it earlier thanks
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HeatherReader Hey author-sama, I left a review on your book. Please do mine too. Much appreciated
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26416663305042405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4320321696
MeowMeowGourmet yes I saw thank you!
My review is ongoing. I wonder why the story isn't appearing on your profile tho?
MeowMeowGourmet can't find the story in the app either
How do you leave reviews in dynamic reader?
MeowMeowGourmet Let me know if you wanna review swap.
Here's my book: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-three-anomalies_25884591705262505
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HeatherReader I'm not quite sure about that. Here's the link, it might work this time https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26416663305042405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4320321696
Thanks author-sama