DARK_DEKU I am currently reading yours. The first chapter needs improvement. Should I leave Pointers in para comments or just move on and review it?

@HeatherReader "
I'm also just getting started with writing, my book is called Veil of Shadows: The Necromancer's Awakening. It would be really great to get a review or two. I can look at your book tomorrow and give an honest review on Thursday.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/veil-of-shadows-the-necromancer's-awakening_26442051905123005

I'll add it to my list and leave a review tomorrow night

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