Ruemari_Cordan Left you a review. For the honest feedback, have left a few para comments. Please feel free to delete whenever done with them.
Also, one suggestion would be to please download Grammarly free version or use its desktop site to revisit the chapters individually. Once the basic edits are done, the flow should be much smoother.
Happy writing to you 
review swap anyone ?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/rise-of-idan-nigeria's-reign_26432474505097105
NPCs Will do, but would be able to review by next Sunday. Have added the book to my library. Do the same for 'Moonlit Identity'.
Will ping after dropping the review.
Flattened_Rice_007 done the review for yours already
Can someone provide me with some comparative feedbacks between my first and the lastets chapter??
Beyond The Unknowns
http://wbnv.in/a/ffhfmsT
About to read it now.
TheWriter117 Saw your review. Thank you for your time.
NPCs Saw your review. There seems to be some confusion. The MC cannot see the future. Neither the novel has reached any climax.
Can you please remove these two parts?
I am ok with the suggestions and areas of development.
TheWriter117 By the way, just saying this for your own benefit, no malice intended. I saw in one of the threads that if you give too many reviews of less than 3 stars, Webnovel doesn't allow you to review stories later on.
Might be wrong. But check once.
Never heard of it but I actually gave a few 3 stars reviews. When I read novels, I'm not skimming it, I'm really reading it so I can give a valid review. It's why my reviews are longer and more detailed when compared to the reviews I have seen in most stories I have read here. Also noted, thank you
TheWriter117 Cool. Then might be wrong.
Grandmasters Have reviewed yours. Please check.
As honest feedback, the information dump in the first chapter is too heavy (at least for me).
RomanceFanatic028 I would like to really thank you for your feedback. It was most helpful, especially regarding the commas. I have edited all my chapters accordingly.
Thank you once again.
