NPCs bruh... That review.
Did you read? Or gathered that from the book synopsis.
I m curious

    NPCs Thanks for the lengthy review but you used the wrong name, 'throne of something..'
    Please, repost it with the correct name or don't mention a name at all.

      DARK_DEKU I am afraid I can't bring myself to leave you a review for the book on your book page, unless you will be okay with me leaving a very negative review. I've read the whole book and I'll just leave my comments here:

      • Lack of plot
      • Immature tone, I am not sure if this intentional
      • Inadequate punctuation
      • Poor character development, including Max - I couldn't tell anything about him. He sounds like he is four of 10 idk
      • Insufficient descriptive elements; more suited for a play than a book

      I hope this help you improve your book.

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