Hello Everyone,
I hope this post finds you all well. I'm excited to announce that I have started a comprehensive rewrite of my previous work. I've spent considerable time refining and improving the narrative based on the feedback received during its initial run, and now, I'm eager to hear your thoughts on this revised version.
The rewrite attempts to address the areas of concern that were previously highlighted, and I've also tried to bring more depth to the characters, enhance plot development, and improve overall readability. But, of course, this is just from my perspective. Your insights, as fellow writers and readers, are invaluable in this process.
I'm particularly interested in your feedback on:
- Plot: Does the story flow better? Is there improved cohesion and clarity in the plot?
- Language and Style: Is the language more engaging? Has the writing style improved in terms of fluidity and readability?
- Overall Impression: Has the rewrite improved the overall impression of the work? Would you recommend it to others?
I appreciate your time and constructive feedback. The link to the new novel is The Curse Of Wardoks: A Tale Of Two Worlds. Please feel free to comment on this thread or PM me your thoughts. Looking forward to hearing from you!
Thank you in advance for your help and support!
please! I'll be waiting to see your review after going through my locked chaps 
Just making sure your up!
this is why if you don't want to do more just 80 to last