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At the same time, he was using this beast soul to decline Han Sen’s asking for the iron-feathered bird before Han Sen even asked.
(the sentence doesn't flow at all....so maybe something like this to make it flow better)
Before Han Sen even asked, he was using this beast soul to prevent Han Sen from taking the iron-feathered bird.
70
Han Sen was surprised and quickly made a gesture to asked Lu Weinan to remain silent and watch the hornet from here.
Han Sen was surprised and quickly made a gesture to Lu Weinan to remain silent and watch the hornet from here.
71
Lu Weinan did not expect that Han Sen would risk approaching the nest himself, which was far more dangerous than his part in thIs.
Lu Weinan did not expect that Han Sen would risk approaching the nest himself, which was far more dangerous than his part.
bump....so will it be fixed any time soon?
73
"I need to be more."
"I need to be more powerful."
so am I wasting time helping fix typo since it won't be fixed any time soon?
Did not know this place till yesterday:(
chapter 402
its eight claws moving up an if d down.
The beast soul did not pause and entered Ning Yue's body. The giant creature sent itself into Han Sen's chest with ease.
Ning Yue felt his whole body was stabbed and impaled, like someone was slicing his muscle.
(should be "into Ning Yue's chest with ease")
chapter 404
as soon as he saw you the shelter
as soon as he saw you in the shelter
chapter 406
had an even better same experience then driving a top sports car
had an even better experience then driving a top sports car
410
Han Sen felt upset because he wasted all they and ended up in a wrong place.
Han Sen felt upset because he wasted all day and ended up in a wrong place.
413
Very soon, Han Sen smiled food.
(smell food not smile food)
As their immune system went down, they all died in God century within three days
As their immune system went down, they all died in God's Sanctuary within three days
414
After all, Shura almost had no ability to fight was entering God’s Sanctuary.
After all, Shura almost had no ability to fight after entering God’s Sanctuary.
He wanted life essence bad.
He wanted life essence badly.
415
Otherwise, there would be a million for Shura spies among human.
Otherwise, there would be a million Shura spies among human.
418
When Han Sen could something, she would eat it without apologies.
When Han Sen gave her something, she would eat it without apologies.
419
In addition, with Zero’s physique, Han Sen did not there to piss her off
In addition, with Zero’s physique, Han Sen did not try to piss her off
420
Han Sen summoned the golden growler and took Zero to those locations indicated by Nina
(Ning not Nina)
Hailey was so young that she would not come to God’s Sanctuary for years.
(Han Yan not Hailey)
421
The only issue was that Han Sen was not able to take back crystal out of God’s Sanctuary.
The only issue was that Han Sen was not able to take the black crystal out of God’s Sanctuary.
(the black crystal)
422
Even if he were to eat it, he would do that after he revolved.
Even if he were to eat it, he would do that after he evolved.
(evolved)
423
There were hundreds or even thousands of billions of revolvers.
(evolvers)
427
A lot of people near them started to cast envious glance am the guy.
A lot of people near them started to cast envious glance at the guy.
Four mutant evolvers, thirty years old was young.
For mutant evolvers, thirty years old was young.
"The week or the week. Cut the crap. What’s the point of acting nice when you are just a primitive evolver?" The young man gave Han Sen a stare and said, disdained.
(The weak and the weak.)
I’ve found a mistake, can’t remember which chapter but it’s everytime dollar is written as “coin” stop it, no one likes coin, dollar is much better sounding. He’s all about the dollar sounds better than he’s all about the coin.
terminatermike1 Dollar was the mistranslation, since Han Sen will use a coin as a move in the future.
Eliza_Thornberry If it’s a mistranslation then it’s better than the original. So is he Misaka now? Using a coin as a weapon.
439
because the crackling souds did not disappear
because the crackling sounds did not disappear
440
When stuck, He would be in trouble.
When stuck, he would be in trouble.
446
Those who were trying to kill Han Sen were snatch some meat all felt a chill and stepped back involuntarily.
Those who were trying to kill Han Sen to snatch some meat all felt a chill and stepped back involuntarily.
450
Since he had many asked class licenses
Since he had many S-class licenses
448
The greatest strength about the sky was probably the fact that he graduated with the rank of major.
The greatest strength about the guy was probably the fact that he graduated with the rank of major.
451
Hew Han Sen looked was exactly what was described in the Micro Crystal tutorial.
How Han Sen looked was exactly what was described in the Micro Crystal tutorial.
454
More and more people told each other about the news, making those who had lost hope and her God’s sanctuary again.
More and more people told each other about the news, making those who had lost hope to re-enter God’s sanctuary again.
465
"Retreat that at the retreat into the ruin…"
"Retreat into the ruin…"
