Evil_Avatar Can you swap reviews ?I already reviewed yours !Check my account if you don't see the review under your book !

      B_DRAG done....here's minehttps://www.webnovel.com/book/the-fake-%22i-do%22_26209842406642205

          B_DRAG I was able to comment but I was unable to make reviews it wasn't working...is there a way to go about it,? You can kindly share

              B_DRAG Hmm, well then, no problem. I remember reading your story. Is his name Gui Wang, right?

              The introduction of the assassin system and the subsequent battle between the warrior and Gui Wang adds an intriguing element to the story. The use of the mirror and the soul assimilation technique demonstrates the warrior's resourcefulness and cunning.

              Furthermore, the description of the battlefield and the contrasting conditions of the warrior and the demon adds depth to the story. The vivid imagery allows readers to envision the intensity of the battle and the resilience of the warrior, despite his injuries.

              However, the story occasionally suffers from abrupt transitions and could benefit from smoother segues between scenes. The introduction of the elderly woman and the pills feels somewhat disconnected from the main narrative, leaving the reader with unanswered questions.

              I read a few chapters before I stopped.

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