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That said, the comments per chapter read will be ideal to show you TRULY read the story.

If you're up for such honest Reviews AND Comments, please do mine as well! You may be brutal if you wish.

https://m.webnovel.com/book/after-surviving-the-apocalpse-i-built-a-city-in-another-world_26625133006952605

Pls check out my story!

Khalifa: Queen in the Apocalypse

Honest reviews are also welcome

Novel name - Servant of Greed
Novel Link - https://www.webnovel.com/book/servant-of-greed_26393645405972605
In a realm eternally draped in shadows, where the clash between day and night defines its very existence, a young boy from the enigmatic dark side finds his world shattered by a cataclysmic event.
In the midst of his grief and confusion, he forms an unlikely alliance with a powerful deity who emerges from the shadows. Together, they embark on a perilous journey to uncover the truth and restore the balance of the world.
Join this unlikely duo as they forge a path through darkness and light, unearthing the truths that will reshape their world and redefine their own destinies. Prepare to be enthralled by an epic journey where hope gleams amidst the darkest of nights.

Theothegiant
hey can you check out my book it is called rues and roses
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it is a royal romance

For WSA 2023~

Warning: mature content is present, read at your own risk.

Despite her trying to sound cool, he could hear her slight pants.

"What were you doing?" He asked, forgetting everything.

That's how it was for them. They could be in the middle of the most serious issue yet the slightest change in their breathing would make the other curious.

"If I say that I was, or more like, am fingering myself while thinking about you, would you come here and f*ck me?" She said while putting two fingers inside of herself.

A moan left her lips and his d*ck hardens on the other side.

"F*ck, Andrew, ah," she was moaning on purpose, to get a reaction out of him.

She wanted to test him till he breaks and later fulfilled her with his entire being.

She knew that she wasn't supposed to want him and so did he but the heart wants what the heart wants.

And forbidden fruits always taste better.

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All of a sudden, he moved a little away and by not feeling the same sensation as before, she opened her eyes with an annoyed look.

She was almost about to come.

"Why did you stop -" she was cut off by her own moan.

He did the most unthinkable thing. He slapped her pu*sy. She thought that it would hurt her but it had the exact opposite reaction.

It ended up sending an electric shock through her body but one that was filled with pleasure. She was looking at him with pleading eyes.

She didn't know what she wanted him to do but she wanted something from him and he understood even though she didn't vocalize her thoughts.

He made a silent promise to fulfill all of her fantasies and with that, he slapped her again.

And she moaned in pleasure again. Who knew that something that counts as a punishment could bring one so much pleasure?

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Tangled by an interesting past, lust, and underworld matters. And most importantly heart.

Both of them refused to fall for the other again but for how long? In this twisted game called lust, would they end up falling for each other?

Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/25800187705948605?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4317414678

RoxanaWordsmith will read the second one

RoxanaWordsmith Done!

Hey!
Check mine please
https://www.webnovel.com/book/let-me-adore-you-lilac_26437775306354805

Theothegiant Done~

NispedanaSan Hi! I’ll leave a review and comments within an hour or two, here’s my link and synopsis: https://m.webnovel.com/book/travesty-of-1959_26147833805198705

The corpses under her bed chambers, the shadows creeping by the door, the painted-over bloodstains on the wall, and the voices in her head.

Ines Lacroix is bound to the past with curses of eons deep within her bones. She dances to the melody of history like a marionette, bleeding and suffering for actions she has never done.

She dreams to be part of the blazing stars in the sky when her destiny has always been to be part of the average population.

She swears that she is normal when she is far from being normal.

She hears voices and has another persona, yet, she swears that it is normal too.

“Do you hear it too?”

Fire_Duck done!

HeatherReader
yo everyone
this book is a must read if you love r 18 hahah

mahe_ale_aba Doneeee

mahe_ale_aba will check!

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