Sky001 Done. One tip I would give you is to avoid overusing (...) and consider updating the cover to attract a larger audience.

    DubiousTone Enjoyed your story so much that I decided to pause at ch5 it so that I could savor it for later, added to my collections. Already reviewed, though subject to change as I keep going. Please review mine as well, it's an Eastern Fantasy with what I hope is an interesting premise.

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      MartinsEmmanuel Review done! It's not my standard fare so it's quite hard for me to give helpful information for you to implement, or to give an objective critique. The grammar is on-point and the descriptions dense and evocative. All in all, good work!

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