Annisax Hey I read your story and has an interesting premise. What I found is that it needs a proofreading because the dialogue quotation are incorrect and the grammar needs help. Also there is an inconsistency with the timeline when the things are happening. Mmm the teacher calling Rielle the goodness is sounds weird is ok like between the students but is a little concerning from him. It would benefit if you describe the characters how they look or hints on how the look. I can give you more suggestions but here is a bit difficult here. Keep up the good work! 😊

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          Hi check out my story and give me a review oh and maybe give me a power stone vote too please ( review swap) Thanks 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

          https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-shadow-oath_26777206606449705/part-1-outcast-and-the-shadow-deity_71879805561271809

          Synopsis

          In "The Shadow Oath", a disgraced samurai named Kazuki, falsely condemned to die, is graced by a deity of darkness named "Tsukuyomi" with enigmatic shadow magic. Tormented by his wrongful banishment, Kazuki begins a journey to right the wrongs committed against him. His quest is not solo, as he crosses paths with Shôkin Kagiri, a seasoned bounty hunter who guides him to channel his shadow magic for justice, rather than revenge.

          Meanwhile, Kuroyama the Advisor, manipulates the young Shogunate from the shadows, ruling with fear and brutal force. His control is further solidified by his loyal subordinates from the Minamotos clan, warriors each possessing unique, deadly magic abilities gifted by the gods.

          "The Shadow Oath" is an epic tale of redemption and revenge set in a world brimming with magic and political intrigue. This thrilling narrative unfolds as Kazuki, fights to regain his lost honor and reshape his destiny.

            Hello, everyone! If you're interested in fantasy romance novels, maybe this novel is for you! Just tag me if you want review or collection swaps!

            Title: A Transmigrator's Journey To Another World
            Genre: Fantasy
            Status: Serializing
            Description: The Gods have battled against corruption, a solidified form of a person’s most profound and darkest desire that has gradually taken over humanity for centuries. They exerted their power to create Akhali, a new world to offer a second chance to conquer this evil.

            Angels, demons, magic, spirits, and gods inhabit this world. With its enigmatic elements, Chesah Dani Manalo transmigrated and never expected to be given another chance after meeting her demise. As the saying goes, you can only honestly believe something if you experience it yourself.

            She found love, support, and familial connections by possessing Princess La Adelaide Irvine Almanaz, an unfortunate princess. All empires sought her, for she gained new and overpowering abilities that quivered the world upon awakening.

            But having great power comes with great responsibility. Chesah’s fate changes after discovering the anomalies the corrupted people had summoned and the truth about her transmigration.

            With her new life and identity, she knew what she needed to do to defeat the corruption tainting the world.

            Now, Chesah's journey as Adelaide… begins.

            Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/a-transmigrator's-journey-in-another-world_26839488005399905###

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