I honestly didn't mind his novel except the things I commented on and how the MC loves to see people in pain.
If he's going to revise and rewrite his novel then I don't mind using money to become a 'supporter' on patron again.
Otherwise, no. It just isn't worth my money to read a novel like that.
If Bai is reading this(Eh, Idc if you are) then I suggest:
1. Don't make the MC an idiot again
Decent update stability - I don't care if you update everyday, at least stick to a schedule(That is if you made one, or you're just updating randomly. If it is the latter then I won't even spare this novel a glance)
MC is boring..He just goes around rescuing beautiful maidens that just happen to be in danger, kills a few people, goes to a new place and then repeat. Make him more interesting..
Don't repeat chapters. Meaning, don't make 5 chapters that are literally about drinking tea and nothing else except idle chit chatter. It's just....stupid
The harem...So far, it's about 4-5 people(Up to chapter 72) and if you're going to add even more girls to the harem then this is just not going to cut it for me. I personally don't like harems but if I find the novel is good I try to just ignore it. But this novel already has 5 people in the harem in less than 80 chapters. I've read other novels that have 1-6 harems but the harem only grows to that size when it's at least over 400 chapters. At least make it 2 girls in the harem in the first 100 chapters..
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These are what I suggest should change, otherwise, there are plenty of other good novels in the world..