This is my novel, review, collection, and paragraph comments swap

Title: The not-so-invisible tie
Genre: historical romance/ female leading
synopsis: A story of stolen glances and broken promises, a story of love and rivalry and alliance.

Born as the seventh princess to the Taneryan empire, princess El-Huaria was the brightest amongst her peers, considered as a jewel for her intelligence and skills, with no compitition whatsoever. Except of course for her one and only rival Hebaron from her days in the academy, and while they couldn't stand eachother he was the only person who deserved her respect for his great efforts at giving her a fair compitition.

Now they are forced to work together in alliance to win the war. will they be able to overcome their rivalry and be partners in achieving victory? would she keep her secret safe for the time of their partnership?

** link:** https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26758788206394405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4324456273

    Quwalasto I will not do it through comments or the review perse because I feel that can hinder the story. Did you want me to drop the constructive feedback here?

        wilde0985 If you have questions regarding the story you can comment on the paragraph! As for the criticism, you can mention how I can improve in the review

          wilde0985 Hi! I saw your comments on my novel and I adore them. Whilst you go through mine I'll start going through yours. Which novel of yours would you like me to read through?

              Who is ready to check out mine ?
              If you are then search
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              Once you done yours and I receive a notification them imma do yours too
              Or you can simply tag me

                Quwalasto Oh thank you I really like the story so far. I just have a few things to say about it when I finish the reading, I will do the review, but also I would like to tell you through here because it's quite long and short what I want to ask, so I hope you don't have a problem with that. My story is called Sky Falls: A Loop in Time (BL) it's omegaverse. It doesn't have smut or anything.

                https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26239265106741005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4321630622

                Anyways I have a discord too, you can find me here: https://discord.gg/gnkcN4wa because I don't know how to share my profile.

                    Chiyo_Kobayashi Sure, mmm, you have more chapters than me I'm still reading Quwalasto story, so I will start with yours tomorrow if that's ok with you. Oh, and my story is BL Omegaverse I hope you don't have a problem with that if you don't read BL let me know.

                    Edit: It doesn't have smut.

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