Hello everyone,
I’m a new author and would like to get some feedback on my book. Let’s swap honest reviews.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/starstruck-sonata_27039410106410905/harmonic-encounter_72583400946464439
Review my book first and then I will review yours!
Review Swap
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https://www.webnovel.com/book/rain-rain-go-away-come-again-another-day_26557020606729705
Please have a go at reading this, i promise you, that you would enjoy every single moment, and suck in the richness of this story that reading it a second time wouldn't faze you but immerse you deeper into the world of Kian, and his story
Everybody hates the rain right?
The rain is quite the oxymoron,
lest they are morns for being an irony
When the sun shines it rains
So we sing rain rain go away,
come again another day.
what day exactly?
a sad day?
a happy day?
a cloudy day
everyone hates the rain right?
Why?
"I Love it"
Kian, A boy who feels found when under the rain,
"Kian, what makes you happy?"
"..."
"Kian?"
Silently in the distance a group of children in yellow rain coats sing "Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day"
This is the romantic and deeply moving story of a boy named Kian, who, rejected by his lover, feels despair and pain. He finds peace under the mysterious raindrops. In a world where he feels like an outsider, Kian strives to find true love and compassion while discovering himself and unravelling the mysteries of his own heart.
Unbeknownst to Kian, his world evolves gradually.
"When rainfall comes, the world grows magical," murmured an old woman from a distance, her voice carrying a gentle wisdom. She stood there, observing a young boy with dishevelled black hair and captivating cerulean eyes, his gaze filled with longing as he stared intently at the falling rain.
"The rain..."
"It's sad"
"Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day"
I don't need a review but more of chapter comments or paragraph comments if u feel like my book is too long or boring u can start around chapter 10 where most of the action happens or was it chapter 9? its better if u read the whole thing
1stDaoistOfReading please collection, comments and review, I'll do the same for you.
Spirit of the white lotus . My link ain't working
Huiyin_ing since you are asking you should go first lmao, so i can see some sincerity
1stDaoistOfReading I've added your book
Huiyin_ing where is your book? I will review it and add to my collection.
Here is mine, can you do the same?: https://www.webnovel.com/book/deep-into-space_27065231306495205
Add my book
It’s a fan fic novel
It’s called
He is the change she has been waiting for
JayZee_007 Spirit of the white lotus. I dunno what's wrong with the link and it ain't working. I've added yours
Is anyone up for a swap? Here's my link!!!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-moon's-mighty-alpha_23609233006919805
Huiyin_ing did u leave ur review to my book? i cannot see it yet. can u do it again?
Huiyin_ing i just leave my review to ur book. can u give ur review to my book?
JayZee_007 I've done yours and some comments and ps, I love it to be sincere
Huiyin_ing thank you so much!
coco1193 Hello, would you like to exchange review too? I already added your book to my collection , if you want , please criticize my novel
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-monarch_27061092806482905
I already checked yours before
Hi! new writer here though i love writing because my concept is a bit more different than others its not getting the recognition i think it deserves i love honest reviews so please do check it out and please do comment your book underneath my comment so i can check it out and give a honest review also! ^^
my book:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-fog-corrupts-your-mind._27024859105094205
Huiyin_ing hey there
Are you on discord ??
If you are then send me your link let’s be friends