Kulkuljator hello, I read your story and commented there, I left some comments on some chapters that, are few, but were the ones that caught my attention the most

    Eric_Mantswe hello , I reviewed it and gave an honest opinion , if you rewrite something or change it , you can send me a message again and I will redo the review

      DARK_DEKU I did the review , sorry if something I said bothered you , if you want to change my opinion post more chapters , it 's in my collection and I 'll follow , good luck and keep up the hard work

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