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I'm looking for anyone that can help give feedback and suggestions about my web-novel, anything is appreciated whether it's dissing the book, I'll happily do the same for yours as well, here's mine and a small summery:
Ascension of Elden
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From the depths of the Earth, a Great Chasm erupted, bridging continents once separated. This cataclysmic event unleashed mysterious Essence energies, bestowing otherworldly powers upon those who could master them. However, those who mishandled Essence faced the risk of transforming into corrupted monsters.
Five centuries have passed since the Great Chasm's emergence. The world has adapted to utilizing—and warring over—the powers of Essence. Monstrous beasts rise from the chasm's depths, endangering civilization, yet humanity tenaciously clings to hope.
Elden leads a humble, solitary life. None know he harbors a dark secret—a corrupted spirit that is stirred whenever he channels the raw Essence of the chasm within him. Yet above all, Elden wishes for nothing more than peace.
However, destiny has other plans for him. Will he embrace his dark side to protect himself? As he grapples with controlling his corruption, he ponders—does he even hold a soul worth saving?
Elden's journey to find his own redemption will reveal the hidden history of the Great Chasm and its mysterious connection to the fate of humanity. His quest to contain the chaos within himself may hold the key to containing the much greater chaos threatening to consume the world.
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