So I just started yesterday, just comment your opinion on my WN
here's mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/atonement's-path_27176061705651405
Name: Atonement's Path
It has some complicated words but you can still understand it because of the sentences, the pacing is also bad.
Also here's the whole synopsis
"In a fantasy-driven world, Zagorzaly Frostpyre is a ruthless villain who has killed thousands of humans and other races for pleasure. He has no remorse for his actions and continues to commit heinous crimes with zero regard for human life. His actions finally catch up to him when he is forced to confront his past deeds by the ultimate power in the universe, Luca, who sentences him to live a life of perpetual pain and suffering unless he reforms his ways. Zagorzaly must now embark on a journey of redemption, where he meets new people and experiences things he never thought possible before."

(Note: The Gods here and other religious elements are made by me and it's not related to the religion in our World.)
(Also read this while listening to Rises the Moon cause why not)

    Hey. Just dropped the second chapter to my Web Novel series, My Mafia System: I'm Going To Build The Mafia In A Fantasy world. I'd appreciate it if you checked it out! And if you love it, please pick a collection, leave a review and wait for more chapters.

    Does everyone truly deserve a second life? The idea of reincarnation is an opportunity for one to turn over a new leaf. However, what if God reincarnates someone just for his amusement and entertainment. That's exactly the case of Fujikawa Takuji, an infamous mafia boss, who unfortunately met his end. God offered him a second life of evil in the Middle Realm, a world of swords and magic. However, Takuji isn't reincarnated empty-handed. He is reincarnated with a system - Mafia System. However, Takuji is reincarnated as Chloe Granbel, the first child and first daughter of the Baron Granbel family. Read Chloe's journey as she has to build a mafia group in a fantasy world. What will Chloe do to build connections and rise her mafia group. https://www.webnovel.com/book/27025968305098505/72925341009636296?utm_campaign=4322795312

      Hey guys heres my book and it's synopsis I'd love for you to have a read.

      The world is broken and overrun with demons, but honestly, I could care less. After all, the only thing I want...

      IS TO SEE THE WORLD BURN

      Follow Jireh on his journey of hate and revenge as he challenges both Heaven and Hell to assert his domion and get his Infernal Redemption

      http://wbnv.in/a/40hsvGZ

        Hey. Just dropped the third chapter to my Web Novel series, My Mafia System: I'm Going To Build The Mafia In A Fantasy world. I'd appreciate it if you checked it out! And if you love it, please pick a collection, leave a review and wait for more chapters.

        Does everyone truly deserve a second life? The idea of reincarnation is an opportunity for one to turn over a new leaf. However, what if God reincarnates someone just for his amusement and entertainment. That's exactly the case of Fujikawa Takuji, an infamous mafia boss, who unfortunately met his end. God offered him a second life of evil in the Middle Realm, a world of swords and magic. However, Takuji isn't reincarnated empty-handed. He is reincarnated with a system - Mafia System. However, Takuji is reincarnated as Chloe Granbel, the first child and first daughter of the Baron Granbel family. Read Chloe's journey as she has to build a mafia group in a fantasy world. What will Chloe do to build connections and rise her mafia group. https://www.webnovel.com/book/27025968305098505/72925341009636296?utm_campaign=4322795312

          Hey. Just dropped the third chapter to my Web Novel series, My Mafia System: I'm Going To Build The Mafia In A Fantasy world. I'd appreciate it if you checked it out! And if you love it, please pick a collection, leave a review and wait for more chapters.

          Does everyone truly deserve a second life? The idea of reincarnation is an opportunity for one to turn over a new leaf. However, what if God reincarnates someone just for his amusement and entertainment. That's exactly the case of Fujikawa Takuji, an infamous mafia boss, who unfortunately met his end. God offered him a second life of evil in the Middle Realm, a world of swords and magic. However, Takuji isn't reincarnated empty-handed. He is reincarnated with a system - Mafia System. However, Takuji is reincarnated as Chloe Granbel, the first child and first daughter of the Baron Granbel family. Read Chloe's journey as she has to build a mafia group in a fantasy world. What will Chloe do to build connections and rise her mafia group. https://www.webnovel.com/book/27025968305098505/72925341009636296?utm_campaign=4322795312

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