Hello! I'm a relatively new author here, went on a hiatus months ago and I just recently came back to write my new novel. I'm not quite sure what the market here is in webnovel and views are running a bit low so I don't know what's wrong with my novel in terms of quality.

I'm open to do some review, comment and collection swaps with anyone here, but with mutual feedback. I do want to know what I can improve.

Here's my fantasy isekai novel!
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26823582006601205?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4321425628

    the_idyllic_scribe I didnt really got one. Lately, I didn't recive many reviews as they had the word 'BL', Previously, they just didn't get publshed byt now I won't receive them in inbox either. Before, I at least got them in inbox.

    I had to check evryone's profile pages when they say they did it and take a screen shot, post it by myself. I checked yours and disnt see that day. But now that I see it, it says it was posted three days ago.

    You were right. You had posted it. May be it showed up late even in your pf page.

    Whatever, you said you deleted it. It's okay. I will do yours now since you already did and will post your review as a screenshot.
    I will do yours now.(account bl freak)

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