Gabriel_VI Uhmmm, I have a story Lazy Jester is the title... i am really bad at grammar can you help me by reviewing my work? I want to know what are my mistakes and what I lack the most. thank you!
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- Aug 26, 2022
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TITLE : LAZY JESTER
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GENRE: Magical Realism, Adventure, Romance, ActionLink:https://www.webnovel.com/book/16317537206667205/Lazy-Jester
Synopsis:
Every thing changed after the awakening of the young man called Kyle. He was a genius in arts, sports and literature. but in his 12th birthday bring doom to his life, it was the day for his Age Ceremony and the town's elder together with the assistants from the church will test his magical abilities and 'awaken' him to know his powers. His parents expectations makes things worst, they think that they son will get at least a Grade A talent in magic but their expectation failed them.
Their son, Kyle only got the last rank, the Grade D magic.
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