Nightmare_weaver Review swap.. I am gonna review yours one now.
AnOrdinaryCitizen6
- Apr 16, 2020
- Joined Sep 11, 2019
Gourmet_DAO Thank you, man.
- Edited
Gourmet_DAO I will say that no one of them is guilty. You will find the rest on the next chapter 7 and 8. You know I can't disclose it yet. :)
Gourmet_DAO I understand your point of view. But I am hoping, not telling to follow
. you will able to see the actual seen in the chapter 7th and 8th. I will disclose the main event about the 1st chapter happening. :) If you not follow then I will be just losing another person who might help me out pointing my mistake. If you follow then I will be glad. :DGourmet_DAO Thank you for reading until then... I am really grateful to you for doing this feedback and showing me some faults. I will try to correct those.
But I have a question to you about the rape thing, When the MC was awakened he was fulled with beautiful females and the bewitching princess was calling him to take her. While the princess said that she was raped, isn't both thing indicates somewhat confusing to you who was supposed to judge the story? How you missed it? xD I know I have some mistakes. But in this thing, I didn't make any mistake. Raped doesn't look rape if she was asking him to take her in the first chapter, she might be confused.
I am a nobel person, I don't like rape thing at all.- Edited
Gourmet_DAO Raw staff... I have written chapter 6 and 7th today. Now writing the 8th. xD
Gourmet_DAO Okay. xD Maybe I will be releasing 3 chapters tomorrow... Hope you will like those chapters.
- Edited
Gourmet_DAO Hahahaha... I was able to trick you then. xD Read chapter 5 then. You will know what it's about. What you are thinking it's not about them at all.
Guys, I would love to have an honest review. I know I haven't updated regularly. I am planning the stories and some background research so didn't want to update until tomorrow. I hope you will like the ideas and give me honest feedback so that I could improve further. xD
Title: The Indomitable Mage, Ruler of The Universe
Genre: Fantasy, Magic, Action, Adventure, Fantasy Romance
Synopsis:
How would you feel if you get trapped into a dream and how you will react to the temptation that is before your sinful eyes? What if you get killed in that mind game of the dreams, are they really lethal let alone, dreams?To his horror when he opened his eyes, he realized that he didn't wake up yet rather was still dreaming.
He was often drifted into a dreamland of weirdness but this time, it was completely unusual. He could feel the pain, emotions of ecstasy as he was having fun in a sexual wonderland.
Although it sounded nonsensical yet satisfactory with those elven ladies serving him, but later on it brought disaster because his dreams had always ended up with terror-struck and profusely sweating awakening.
Several elven girls were serving him as his tool of enjoyment, a bewitching captive princess was there for his needs until he passed out from exhaustion hoping to wake up from this 'realistic dream'.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15782747106050505/The-Indomitable-Mage%2C-Ruler-of-The-Universe
Thank you very much... I will try yours now. :D
Congratulations
I hope you guys will continue to surprise us more.
I didn't expect I will make it up to the top 5 with only 4 chapters and irregular, lazy updates!!!
That surprised to my core. Now I think, I have to be more diligent. 
Here is my novel, I hope you will visit it, read it and give me an honest review. An honest review might help me later as a writer. Thank you all in advance.
Title: The Indomitable Mage, Ruler of The Universe
Genre: Fantasy, Magic, Fantasy Romance, Action, Adventure.
Synopsis:
How would you feel if you get trapped into a dream and how you will react to the temptation that is before your sinful eyes? What if you get killed in that mind game of the dreams, are they really lethal let alone, dreams?To his horror when he opened his eyes, he realized that he didn't wake up yet rather was still dreaming.
He was often drifted into a dreamland of weirdness but this time, it was completely unusual. He could feel the pain, emotions of ecstasy as he was having fun in a sexual wonderland.
Although it sounded nonsensical yet satisfactory with those elven ladies serving him, but later on it brought disaster because his dreams had always ended up with terror-struck and profusely sweating awakening.
Several elven girls were serving him as his tool of enjoyment, a bewitching captive princess was there for his needs until he passed out from exhaustion hoping to wake up from this 'realistic dream'.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15782747106050505/The-Indomitable-Mage%2C-Ruler-of-The-Universe
Here is my novel, I hope you will visit it, read it and give me an honest review. An honest review might help me later as a writer. Thank you all in advance.
Title: The Indomitable Mage, Ruler of The Universe
Genre: Fantasy, Magic, Fantasy Romance, Action, Adventure.
Synopsis:
How would you feel if you get trapped into a dream and how you will react to the temptation that is before your sinful eyes? What if you get killed in that mind game of the dreams, are they really lethal let alone, dreams?To his horror when he opened his eyes, he realized that he didn't wake up yet rather was still dreaming.
He was often drifted into a dreamland of weirdness but this time, it was completely unusual. He could feel the pain, emotions of ecstasy as he was having fun in a sexual wonderland.
Although it sounded nonsensical yet satisfactory with those elven ladies serving him, but later on it brought disaster because his dreams had always ended up with terror-struck and profusely sweating awakening.
Several elven girls were serving him as his tool of enjoyment, a bewitching captive princess was there for his needs until he passed out from exhaustion hoping to wake up from this 'realistic dream'.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15782747106050505/The-Indomitable-Mage%2C-Ruler-of-The-Universe
Here is my novel, I hope you will visit it, read it and give me an honest review. An honest review might help me later as a writer. Thank you all in advance.
Title: The Indomitable Mage, Ruler of The Universe
Genre: Fantasy, Magic, Fantasy Romance, Action, Adventure.
Synopsis:
How would you feel if you get trapped into a dream and how you will react to the temptation that is before your sinful eyes? What if you get killed in that mind game of the dreams, are they really lethal let alone, dreams?To his horror when he opened his eyes, he realized that he didn't wake up yet rather was still dreaming.
He was often drifted into a dreamland of weirdness but this time, it was completely unusual. He could feel the pain, emotions of ecstasy as he was having fun in a sexual wonderland.
Although it sounded nonsensical yet satisfactory with those elven ladies serving him, but later on it brought disaster because his dreams had always ended up with terror-struck and profusely sweating awakening.
Several elven girls were serving him as his tool of enjoyment, a bewitching captive princess was there for his needs until he passed out from exhaustion hoping to wake up from this 'realistic dream'.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15782747106050505/The-Indomitable-Mage%2C-Ruler-of-The-Universe
Here is my novel, I hope you will visit it, read it and give me an honest review. An honest review might help me later as a writer. Thank you all in advance.
Title: The Indomitable Mage, Ruler of The Universe
Genre: Fantasy, Magic, Fantasy Romance, Action, Adventure.
Synopsis:
How would you feel if you get trapped into a dream and how you will react to the temptation that is before your sinful eyes? What if you get killed in that mind game of the dreams, are they really lethal let alone, dreams?To his horror when he opened his eyes, he realized that he didn't wake up yet rather was still dreaming.
He was often drifted into a dreamland of weirdness but this time, it was completely unusual. He could feel the pain, emotions of ecstasy as he was having fun in a sexual wonderland.
Although it sounded nonsensical yet satisfactory with those elven ladies serving him, but later on it brought disaster because his dreams had always ended up with terror-struck and profusely sweating awakening.
Several elven girls were serving him as his tool of enjoyment, a bewitching captive princess was there for his needs until he passed out from exhaustion hoping to wake up from this 'realistic dream'.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15782747106050505/The-Indomitable-Mage%2C-Ruler-of-The-Universe
Here is my novel, I hope you will visit it, read it and give me an honest review. An honest review might help me later as a writer. Thank you all in advance.
Title: The Indomitable Mage, Ruler of The Universe
Genre: Fantasy, Magic, Fantasy Romance, Action, Adventure.
Synopsis:
How would you feel if you get trapped into a dream and how you will react to the temptation that is before your sinful eyes? What if you get killed in that mind game of the dreams, are they really lethal let alone, dreams?To his horror when he opened his eyes, he realized that he didn't wake up yet rather was still dreaming.
He was often drifted into a dreamland of weirdness but this time, it was completely unusual. He could feel the pain, emotions of ecstasy as he was having fun in a sexual wonderland.
Although it sounded nonsensical yet satisfactory with those elven ladies serving him, but later on it brought disaster because his dreams had always ended up with terror-struck and profusely sweating awakening.
Several elven girls were serving him as his tool of enjoyment, a bewitching captive princess was there for his needs until he passed out from exhaustion hoping to wake up from this 'realistic dream'.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15782747106050505/The-Indomitable-Mage%2C-Ruler-of-The-Universe
Here is my novel, I hope you will visit it, read it and give me an honest review. An honest review might help me later as a writer. Thank you all in advance.
Title: The Indomitable Mage, Ruler of The Universe
Genre: Fantasy, Magic, Fantasy Romance, Action, Adventure.
Synopsis:
How would you feel if you get trapped into a dream and how you will react to the temptation that is before your sinful eyes? What if you get killed in that mind game of the dreams, are they really lethal let alone, dreams?To his horror when he opened his eyes, he realized that he didn't wake up yet rather was still dreaming.
He was often drifted into a dreamland of weirdness but this time, it was completely unusual. He could feel the pain, emotions of ecstasy as he was having fun in a sexual wonderland.
Although it sounded nonsensical yet satisfactory with those elven ladies serving him, but later on it brought disaster because his dreams had always ended up with terror-struck and profusely sweating awakening.
Several elven girls were serving him as his tool of enjoyment, a bewitching captive princess was there for his needs until he passed out from exhaustion hoping to wake up from this 'realistic dream'.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15782747106050505/The-Indomitable-Mage%2C-Ruler-of-The-Universe
Here is my novel, I hope you will visit it, read it and give me an honest review. An honest review might help me later as a writer. Thank you all in advance.
Title: The Indomitable Mage, Ruler of The Universe
Genre: Fantasy, Magic, Fantasy Romance, Action, Adventure.
Synopsis:
How would you feel if you get trapped into a dream and how you will react to the temptation that is before your sinful eyes? What if you get killed in that mind game of the dreams, are they really lethal let alone, dreams?To his horror when he opened his eyes, he realized that he didn't wake up yet rather was still dreaming.
He was often drifted into a dreamland of weirdness but this time, it was completely unusual. He could feel the pain, emotions of ecstasy as he was having fun in a sexual wonderland.
Although it sounded nonsensical yet satisfactory with those elven ladies serving him, but later on it brought disaster because his dreams had always ended up with terror-struck and profusely sweating awakening.
Several elven girls were serving him as his tool of enjoyment, a bewitching captive princess was there for his needs until he passed out from exhaustion hoping to wake up from this 'realistic dream'.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15782747106050505/The-Indomitable-Mage%2C-Ruler-of-The-Universe
Here is my novel, I hope you will visit it, read it and give me an honest review. An honest review might help me later as a writer. Thank you all in advance.
Title: The Indomitable Mage, Ruler of The Universe
Genre: Fantasy, Magic, Fantasy Romance, Action, Adventure.
Synopsis:
How would you feel if you get trapped into a dream and how you will react to the temptation that is before your sinful eyes? What if you get killed in that mind game of the dreams, are they really lethal let alone, dreams?To his horror when he opened his eyes, he realized that he didn't wake up yet rather was still dreaming.
He was often drifted into a dreamland of weirdness but this time, it was completely unusual. He could feel the pain, emotions of ecstasy as he was having fun in a sexual wonderland.
Although it sounded nonsensical yet satisfactory with those elven ladies serving him, but later on it brought disaster because his dreams had always ended up with terror-struck and profusely sweating awakening.
Several elven girls were serving him as his tool of enjoyment, a bewitching captive princess was there for his needs until he passed out from exhaustion hoping to wake up from this 'realistic dream'.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15782747106050505/The-Indomitable-Mage%2C-Ruler-of-The-Universe