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AxlSLL
- Jun 21, 2022
- Joined Jul 31, 2020
- Edited
Synopsis: Nearly 1000 years ago, two mythical figures fought a legendary battle that made the world tremble and get a permanent laceration: Okkos Zeimey, the Great Lich Grandmaster, leader of the Yikkh immigrant tribes, and Ludovik Aurorikus, Grand Vampire Supreme Lord, governor of the native Goiki tribes of the now called Reniram: an island kingdom thirsted by both western and eastern powers.
The lich resulted in the victor, granting his people a new homeland in the world, but Okkos knew that Ludovik wasn’t truly gone. The Vampire Supreme Lord promised to return one day to defeat his eternal lich rival, reclaim the land his people and his vampires rightfully owned, and exterminate the lich from existence.
Okkos swore in response that he would also return to destroy his plans, and mysteriously disappeared shortly after.
Now, after one millennium of foreign interventions, internal civil, religious, and cultural conflicts, as well other magical events, William Amber, a western foreigner, and soldier is captured by privateers and executed on the island.
But it’s not the end for him: he’s saved by mysterious figures, who turn him into a type of undead being now infamous in the modern Reniram: a lich. Their offer? To join their order: the lich order founded by Okkos Zeimey himself.
William accepts and his new life of training, learning, and adventuring as a young lich starts. But strange and terrifying events are happening all across Reniram, and some fear that ancient prophecies and the day of vengeance are due to arrive.
Soon, William discovers that he’s no ordinary lich, and his existence might weigh more than he could ever think in the wheel of destiny.
Follow William on his journey to an eccentric setting of fantastic elements, where he learns about the strange world and cultures he’s in, meets eccentric personalities, and gets stronger and more adept with his new condition and the magical powers of the undead…
Future_M_Animator Done. It's your turn!
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TheGreat_GrandArch That would be an interesting idea, though most of the ones who do that make their stories end up very dragging and bothersome to read. The system is only doing things to troll or to see what happens, and it as a character (if you want to call it that) has no real reasonings or benefits or disadvantages to do things other than 'I'm system. I do system stuff'
Tomoyuki This. It feels as if the system suddenly changes the whole world and it's not only something affecting the MC, which feels very unnatural and inorganic. The results? Lots of Deus Ex Machina, McGuffins, and other stuff that only happens to fulfill the fantasies of the MC or holds his hand for moving the plot. It feels as if the MC is not really doing anything on his own, learning, or genuinely getting stronger. Heck, the MC at that point is not what's carrying the story, it's the system.
Ethel_Imaginations Done! good story
Systems. I mean, they are overused, but most of the time they don't even make sense. Why do they always need to be some kind of MMORPG log or something like computer lines using square brackets for everything? The worst is that every MC, and I mean, every one of them, regardless of their setting or origins, seem to magically know the context about what it is or how it works. I mean, some poor peasant in a medieval setting is not going to know crap about what's going on with something like it. Heck, not even most modern people would not know.
There are better ways of implementing progression and moving the plot, and system is not one of them. It's why I barely read webnovels anymore and just stick to traditional literature, preferably Western. Systems were interesting at first some years ago, but every work now is just the same.
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