Couchroach

  • May 3, 2022
  • Joined Jan 14, 2019
  • In Drop your novel links for free reviews

    I'd really appreciate any response! I'm writing this for my own personal reasons, but I'd love some critique so i can improve as a writer.

    Author: Couchroach
    Title: Craw
    Genre: Magical Realism, Fantasy, Cultivation(?), Martial Arts
    Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12818468006528805/CRAW
    Synopsis: Born under the star of the crab, Rain is a Craw; considered by society to be weak, worthless, and only fit to be a servant because of one reason. Craw's are notoriously believed to be incapable of magic.

    Orphaned, and impoverished Rain struggles to protect his sister who's been cursed and transformed into a black cat. Managing to join Odin's Fists: an organization of mercenaries sent out to complete high-risk tasks for equally high reward. Through determination and hard work, Rain has managed to fight equally against weak magicians and support his family.

    However, prejudice is strong, and life is never static. Facing more and more struggles everyday Rain fights his own self-hatred and insecurities as much as he fights the world itself. Facing the dilemma of finding his own path in a world determined to force him down another.

    • In What is your collection to views ratio?
    • In What is your collection to views ratio?

      I just started publishing yesterday and I'm at 816 views with 2 collections.
      Maybe it's because my first chapter is pretty long or maybe it's a garbage start, I'd really just love to hear some opinions honestly. Even one comment would make my day 😊.

      Even if they just say "you stink man, and story is doo doo bum bum."

      The silence just makes me feel uncomfortable.

      https://www.webnovel.com/book/12818468006528805/CRAW

      • In Writing Prompts Contests #49 & #50
      • In Writing Prompts Contests #49 & #50

        I would love it if people would check out mine as well. I'm an art student in Game Development so writing isn't my focus but I'm used to taking criticism. So if anyone has advice, I am open to hearing it. Thanks!

        https://www.webnovel.com/book/12818468006528805/CRAW
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        Entry for Mage 50:
        Synopsis
        Born under the star of the crab, Rain is a Craw; considered by society to be weak, worthless, and only fit to be a servant because of one reason. Craw's are notoriously believed to be incapable of magic.

        Orphaned, and impoverished Rain struggles to protect his sister who's been cursed and transformed into a black cat. Managing to join Odin's Fists: an organization of mercenaries sent out to complete high-risk tasks for equally high reward. Through determination and hard work, Rain has managed to fight equally against weak magicians and support his family.

        However, prejudice is strong, and life is never static. Facing more and more struggles everyday Rain fights his own self-hatred and insecurities as much as he fights the world itself. Facing the dilemma of finding his own path in a world determined to force him down another.

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